Wednesday, 5 October 2011

Hilma

Hi Angy! I read your posts both on " Through the Tunnel and Silk Scarf". Let me start with Through the Tunnel. You did very well in this short story although you used some sms language. I will reward you 8/10. On the other hand, I believe you read and understoond the Silk Scarf very well because as you summarised your plot someone will understand the story without reading the original text. You deserves 9/10. Stay blessed..

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